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I have to pay much attention to the wet ground after rain so as not to slip.
I have to pay a lot of attention to the wet ground after rain, so as not to slip.
I corrected the sentence to be more natural.
pay much attentio...の意味・用例｜英辞郎 on the WEB：アルク
pay much attention to improving oneself
自分自身を高めることに重きを置く［意識を注ぐ］
単語帳
pay much attention to the effect of
～の効果に多く［かなり］の注意を払う
"pay much attention"というコロケーションは問題なさそう。
"rain"のあとにコンマが必要なのか。
At the same time, there are some refreshment; A rapping noise by a woodpecker to eat a worm under tree bark.
At the same time, there are some refreshing things happening; a rapping noise made by a woodpecker to eat a worm under tree bark.
I corrected the sentence to be more natural.
refreshmentの意味 - 英和辞典 Weblio辞書
不可算名詞 [また a refreshment] 元気回復，気分をさわやかにする[がさわやかになる]こと，心身の爽快(そうかい).
A hot bath is a great refreshment after a day's work. 一日の仕事を済ましてからの入浴は本当に気分がさっぱりする.
"some refreshment"は問題なさそう。
